Architect and the First Queen

This initially started as a 45 minute drawing in Art Therapy, but I ended up not finishing it in session, so I took it home only to thick line it (with pen). However, I had to colour it, and finish it, and I can only say this, I'm bloody proud of it. 

The one on the left is Architect. Once known as Roxana Seiki Abyss, she was a Guardian of the Nuran Systems Alliance during the Condor Expansion. She later left her post and joined the Shrine of Light, and became a Sage, Prophet, Elemental, then Supreme Oracle over a short period of time, before becoming the highest rank of the Shrine of Light, the Architect. When becoming the Architect, the person forgoes their original name to take the rank.
She is the mother of Jhon Abyss, Nelo Abyss, and Lazarus Abyss, but she went missing when the three were adults. Jhon tried to find her, but was also busy building his Dyson Sphere Control Network, so Nelo and Lazarus searched for her. 
After Jhon's entrapment then subsequent ascension/death, Nelo's disappearance, and Lazarus' ascension, she went to find her sons, not knowing what became of them. 
Upon finding Nelo, she demanded answers as to why she couldn't sense the souls of Lazarus and Jhon. Nelo told her that himself, and Lazarus, had trapped Jhon in his own Dyson Sphere Network, but later escaped and died in a fight against The Master, while Lazarus ascended to the next plain, while Nelo himself kept trying to find her.
She later went to find Jhon again, not believing he died. Lazarus had visited her, telling her that Jhon had been in the realm of the Ascended, but had returned to the mortal plain. Lazarus didn't know where Jhon went to, the only thing he knew about that event, was that Jhon had become Hassara Abyss. Architect told Nelo, and both left to find Jhon, with Lazarus leading the way.

The one on the right is the First Queen of the Nuran, a time when the Nuran had rabbit-like features. Born on Col'a Forla 521 million years ago during the Clan Wars, born and raised in the Crystalline Plain. Most of her life is shrouded in mist, even with the Nuran's Genetic Memory.
When the Clan Wars had ended, they needed a single leader, a King or Queen, one who could lead the still fractured Nurankind to a greater future, and maybe try to unify the Nuran more. Oriana Neoma was one of the people picked, since they created a system where a member of each clan would suggest someone, they'd listen to their speeches, see what they do with the public, and then pick who they thought was best.
The Capital city was still being built on, around, and in the mountain where the Clan Wars stopped, and where the cease fire was announced. The building of the new capital was the way the clan chiefs thought would ease the tension between the former warring Clans. 
Oriana Neoma was picked to be the First Queen of the Nuran people, she quickly changed the paradigm of their race, making the people craft swords/blades to become their symbol. Through her leadership, the Nuran quickly spread out across the planet and built towns at a rapid pace, all to expand their race and knowledge. This brought the dawn of the technological era and expansion era, where they took to the planets and satellites in the Nuran Home System, the first place was Domhanda Lar, Col'a Forla's satellite.
This expansion lasted for over 500 years, the same as her leadership, before the Dawn War happened, where an alien race attacked the Nuran, destroying the outposts on the other planetary bodies of the Nuran System, before they landed on Col'a Forla, and tried to destroy the Nuran. Oriana Neoma, the First Queen, took the fight to them, and unified the Nuran. Because of the suffering of her people, and the amount of inoccents dying at the hands of the aliens, she transformed into the 'Hyper Nuran', where she then defeated the alien invaders, and drove them from the Nuran Home System with a handful of other Nuran, who she would then christen the 'Knights of Col'a Forla'. She remained Queen of the Nuran for many years after this, helping the Nuran rebuild, and get back on course, however, she vanished one day, never to be seen again.
Oriana Neoma was the most powerful Nuran to date, she had unrivalled powers in Light and Dark, could fully connect with Cosmic Energy, could see the future to an extent where she could see the life of Hassara Abyss, 521 million years in the future. She was the first to become the 'Hyper Nuran, a trait that all Nuran can now use, and she was the one who created many of the traditions that the current Nuran Systems Alliance still use.

Character(s) belong to me. (Roxana Seiki Abyss (Architect) and Oriana Neoma (First Queen))
Race(s) mentioned belong to me.
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